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The cubicle floor. Mid-morning. Jesse at his desk. The screen in front of him: a queue, longer than yesterday. New flags. New harmonic events. Allred — pan past his shoulder so we can see the queue but not him. We're inside his head this issue; let the camera stay close.

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The supervisor — a beige, untextured man in a beige, untextured suit, SUPERVISOR HOLT — walks the floor. He passes Jesse's cubicle. He stops. He looks at Jesse.

  • HOLTCruz.
  • JESSESir.
  • HOLTYou dismissed a harmonic flag in 7-E yesterday.
  • JESSEI did.
  • HOLTI dismissed your dismissal.
  • JESSEI — saw.

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HOLT crouches a little to put himself at Jesse's eye level. The body language of a man who has trained extensively in non-threatening menace.

  • HOLTJust so we're on the same page, Cruz —
  • HOLT— Compliance Division doesn't dismiss flags in its own analyst's home sector.
  • HOLTIt's a conflict of interest, isn't it?

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Jesse, very still.

  • JESSEYes, sir.
  • HOLTGood man.
  • HOLTI'm sure your neighbors won't mind us looking.

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Holt straightens. Pats Jesse twice on the shoulder. The pat is the most threatening gesture in the issue. Walks on. Jesse does not breathe for a full panel.

  • No copy.

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