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Jesse, staring at his coffee.

  • JESSEMom.
  • JESSEWhat was he doing in that factory.

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Marisol shakes her head. Not angry — just done.

  • MARISOLJesse.
  • MARISOLI said don't.
  • MARISOLI am asking you, as your mother — leave it alone.

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Close on Marisol. Her eyes are wet. She is not crying. She is holding the line. Allred — this is one of the most important panels of the volume. Make us love her. Make us understand that her refusal is the only refusal that ever mattered.

  • MARISOLI cannot lose another one of you to that guitar.
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