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Layout — 4 panels
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The brothers in the tunnel, mid-flight. Dev is laughing. The tunnel is green and clean.
- DEVJESSE.
- JESSEYEAH.
- DEVWE'RE GOING HOME.
- JESSEI KNOW.
- DEVWE'RE BRINGING MOM A WHOLE DAD-STORY.
- JESSEI KNOW.
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Jesse, in the tunnel, looking at his new green guitar. His face — Allred, slow it. The kid who's been clenched since Issue 1 is open.
- JESSEDEV.
- DEVYEAH.
- JESSEWE DID IT.
- JESSEWE'RE GOING TO WIN.
- DEV(grinning)I KNOW WE ARE, BROTHER.
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Mid-tunnel, the green starts to pulse. Not its normal pulse — a wrong pulse, off-frequency, yellow-tinted on the upbeat. Allred — small detail. Most readers won't catch it on first pass. The astute will.
No copy.
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Dev, mid-shuffle, frowning. He has felt the change.
- DEV…Wait.
- JESSEWHAT?
- DEVSOMETHING JUST —
- DEV(yelling, urgent)JESSE — DROP A BEAT.
- JESSEWHAT?
- DEVDROP A BEAT.